I) Introduction
Main idea: I am not in favor of using corporal punishment to discipline
children it can affect a child's brain.
II) Body
Major
Support 1: Why parents use corporal punishment and its effects on the child and
the teacher.
Minor
Support 1: Difficulty controlling parental anger and not understanding the
child.
Minor Support 2: Parents'
anger can reflect on the teacher and affect the child
Major
Support 2: Using corporal punishment can affect a child's brain.
Minor
Support 1: The use of corporal punishment at home and at school can damage a
child's brain and can also cause him to lose confidence.
Minor
support 2: Elizabeth Gershoff says 60% of children are physically punished and
this can lead to brain changes.
III) Conclusion
According to studies, corporal punishment of a child can affect their brain and
their future. Parents need to understand that the primary goal of corporal
punishment is to make children understand bad behavior, not to harm them.